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zer0kage
12-24-2005, 01:05 AM
Well Ill open up with a digitally inked version of my latest drawing. HOw is it? :D To those who encouraged me to examine musculatures to increase the impact of the drawing...Is this better now?

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a24/vasanth/ayane1.jpg

Xebi
12-24-2005, 01:53 AM
less lines in the clothes?
I mean I know real clothes are wrinkeled, but that ribbon seems to have skipped the ironing.
Also it's anime, so it really doesn't need all the realistic wrinkles, just a few.
That's what bothered me the most ^^; the idea that detail has been focused on some parts and on other stuff have been minimal (wich is allright for the anime style)

That's about it for what I had to say, the rest is quite good, astronomy is quite good ^_^
But of course, practice practice practice, and eventualy you'll only get better ^_~

kingx11
12-24-2005, 02:34 AM
the body is good

the eyes isn't that perfect for the charcter

so work hard on it

serpent of the abiss
12-24-2005, 04:19 AM
not bad but when you draw creases in clothes you have to draw were they come from on the clothes, if you know what i mean

zer0kage
12-24-2005, 06:42 AM
I tried to give the ribbon that crepe texture... Is the ribbon better off smooth?

Xebi
12-24-2005, 09:04 AM
I tried to give the ribbon that crepe texture... Is the ribbon better off smooth?Yeah, my best guess is as little as possible wrinkles in the ribbon is best.
After all, the Ribbon is the perfect masterpiece that gives her that cute appearance ^_~

Oh, also as mentioned before, the eyes aren't to fitting for this character, not sure if they would fit on any character.
But meh, yeah, you get the point.

wildx7even
12-24-2005, 09:18 AM
well after adding everyones input to the image try coloring it

zer0kage
12-25-2005, 06:02 AM
Alright how is this.

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a24/vasanth/sa.jpg

serpent of the abiss
12-25-2005, 07:47 AM
add some shading using the levels, or duplicating the layer and darkening it with multiply, there are tutorials on how to shade on good-tutorials.com, using gradients helps

zer0kage
12-28-2005, 03:45 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a24/vasanth/ayanereala.jpg

Made some changes....ready for colouring now?