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    Here's a couple of portraits I shot the first time, expect people to comment. Welcome all!!
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  • #2
    I must say, these are some pretty good shots. Nicely captured gaiety. I have only one little issue with these, that they are too bright overall. It distracts the viewer and steals focus from your model. If the background could be made slightly dimmer in post processing, it would help.
    Hmm...

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    • #3
      Thanks for your comment. Yes, I don't pay attention to the background, I will try to change the background by "Blur". How do you think?
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      • #4
        korean girl? oh w8...no girl ever exist on the internet

        btw, how could this be a portrait when the pic is off center >_>
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        • #5
          Yes off-centered... But overall a lot of color. Amazing.
          But very well done I think.
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          • #6
            I like the first one, but the people in the background hurt the image.

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            • #7
              tch. my legs are smoother.

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              • #8
                @All: thank about all comment, It's useful for me.
                Note: Mode is vietnamese girl.
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                • #9
                  Can't say anything but good. Although you could choose a better background.

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                  • #10
                    Yeah, definitely a little hot with the lights. Sure, it makes it easier to manage the depth of field, but when your light is that flat it tends to make the subject somewhat 2-d. A little shadow can add definition and curves that get washed out in really heavy front lighting. In the case of models, flat lighting is where that "the camera adds 10 lbs" comes from. Depending on the mood that you were going for, the use of color seems appropriate, and while the composition strayed from the classic static portrait, it still seems to be reasonably balanced. I think you probably have a very good eye for what you want, you just need to spend more time with the tools getting a feel for they all fit together. A scrim or fill flash in the right place can do wonders, move it two feet and it can be your worst enemy.
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                    • #11
                      You take it in TN park, right?

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                      • #12
                        @Thocondamdang: no, i take it in Saigon,Lol
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                        • #13
                          @forong: thanks but not professional, i must try hard
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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by aquamarine View Post
                            I like the first one, but the people in the background hurt the image.
                            And the colour of finger-nail hurt the image, too.

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                            • #15
                              Who is that girl? ehmm... so cute...

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